*sigh*….
Where do I begin? Hmm... Oh I got it!



- Dear lizard charmer

The following is a list of suggestions that with which I hope to make you’re forum a lot more… usable.

Personal notes
Not to offend, but this forum absolutely reeks of impulsiveness and spelling errors, and while I don’t wish to bash you’re decision to make a clan the whole thing seems a little… under polished. I really hope you have a plan of where you wish to go with this clan. The whole ranking system and holiday thing and the tournament yadda yadda yadda, leads me to think that you have thought this through but the countless pokemon threads in a board that’s supposed to be for halo 3 suggests otherwise. And as for the spelling errors, please, PLEASE, make sure you have some sort of spell check for this post, for example, has been typed in ms word first. It makes things look SO much better when a clan founder spells things right.

*Organizing
With all the different boards on your forum it really needs to be organized better. For example you could put all the pokemon together.

*Color
I’ve been on your forum for a short time now and I have to say that you should tone down the colors a little, and make it easier on the eyes. You should note that dark backgrounds should sport bright text and bright backgrounds should have dark text.

*Other
I believe that you should get rid of the debate thing, as a halo 3 clan forum is in NOT a place for religion and politics as much as I like a nice debate with friends putting this on your clan forum will just end up offending someone. And also I see you made a reference to a review board, I have heard your plans on internet game reviews, but you have neglected to put that in your forum… try not to do that.

Just some tips on how not to make yourself flamebait, and if you haven’t noticed I have given my words on this post a lot of thought so please don’t approach my constructive criticism with hostility.
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*And now a word from Alien Champion.

Examples of incorrect spelling:
“Tournements” should be “tournaments”, and “hyberbolized” should be “hyperbolized”. Finally, and sadly, “reveiw” should be “review”.

In addition, grammatically, you have made mistakes.
(There should be no space after or before parenthesis) ( Hi )should be (Hi)
Weather = rain. Whether is the word you’re looking for.
Capitalizing is our friend!

Lastly

LizardCharmer wrote:

Asking for me to reveiw some game made 20 years ago ( this of course can be over or under hyberbolized )

Umm… this is a ban-able offense why? Whats wrong with old games? Oh and also again with the spaces before and after parenthesis. Ugh.

This is constructive criticism (albeit delivered in a sarcastic way) so take it or leave it, but be warned. You won’t be taken seriously if you can’t use correct spelling and grammar.

That is all.

-Alien Champion

Hi! You, atomic weasel, must be new hear! I am theuberous, I hope we get acquainted fast! Oh, I see...

Your Already a Mod -_-